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You know

I have seen some good stuff that is somewhat like this, or the same general theme. Except they have music and color and it makes it so much more interesting. I would suggest adding both of those, and then making it longer and then this could be much better. But still, pretty good job.

JustMoney responds:

how about not?

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jk maybe

Uhh

I'm not exactly sure what this is? The animation was good and all but the story, if there is one, is kind of....confusing. All I see is a man in a forest staring at a fish saying what seems to be "Peanut" in the "Peanut Butter Jelly Time" song. Then a face comes down off the screen and it repeats. I think it's broken.

Actually

It was pretty good, but the sounds get a little annoying over time. When they started to die down I got excited, but then they just kind of went back up. If you could lower the sounds a little so that they're more ambiance-like, that'd be a good first step. Also the font color is a little hard to read at times. Also, you could at least alter the shading/contrast on the pixels when it turns nighttime in the scenery/background. Good luck!

Okay

I did appreciate the text because I can't usually understand what the clocks are saying in these flashes. It was actually a little funny since I know people who do that, but it could have been longer and more detailed, especially with basic things like the poster (which still had white around the edges from being cropped or manipulated) common, now! But also that last part was way too harsh to even comprehend, I'm going to guess it said "END" though. Back away from the mic a bit.

Hmm

It's kind of funny, but I feel like you zoom in on the guy's face in order to avoid using mouth movements? Otherwise I don't get it. You can work on detail a bit more, but otherwise it was pretty okay.

Wow

The more I see these cartoons in the series, the more I believe they should be made into feature-length films. You have the most talent I've ever seen on this, or any other site. You sir, are a flash God--a titan over all others. I can't wait for the conclusion. :)

Button doesn't work

The play button isn't working for me. It just presents the new "Play Again" button.

Hmm

Don't get me wrong, I liked it, but I would have liked to hear sound or at least music playing. The sculpture itself was really well done, the stopanimation could have been more smooth and the storyline could be a bit longer, but these are all easily fixed things and for what it is it was good to share. I would highly suggest music or sound though, it would make this go up in ratings fairly easily.

Forefox responds:

I had sound, but for some reason it always made the flash file too big... If I had to delete something that was going to be it.

Oh Hey

Look who I just found uploading a "time-waster" flash. ;) I liked it. It was random and the zorse was cute. Good job. The T-rex was really well done, by the way.

turtleco responds:

it was supposed to be a velocirapter, but I made it way too big. I was going to send you a PM saying that one of my time wasters was complete

wow

lmao i never thought you would post one of these, tim. :P

physicsman09 responds:

Even I have fun on Clock Day.

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